After getting feed back about how to make my image flow better I did some more small ruff sketches and came up with three new ideas how to incorporate my main female. These seem to work a lot better and added more to my narrative, now the figure was now part of the river. I wanted her to be leading the children's lost souls to a better place.
In the end I decided to go with this composition because I thought it flowed and would catch the views eye. Also because the narrative within it was clear but could be read in many different ways and I wanted people to stop and look and think about what my image was about.
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